Seeking Egg Donor

[aqua28]

Sorry, we decided to delete our original ad because it was the one we sent to the minister of health for approval. It sounded too impersonal and lacking in warmth...
Please read our story in the thread- "a bit more about us..." to find out who we are and why we are looking for our donor angel. Thanks. aqua

[aqua28]

Please see our ad under "a bit more about us..."
cheers, aqua

[leisurly]

Hi Aqua

I think you need to make the ad a little more personal, it sounds a bit direct, like your a school teacher and all matter of fact.

Also I'd open up a thread in the main section, just to have a chat about life so that potential donors see you as a person not just someone needing an egg donor.

Lxx

[aqua28]

Hi Leisurly and thank you for the feedback. Our original ad went is as is, based on what we needed to have approved by the minister of health...then we added more information about "us" in another thread...(not sure if you've seen it)... probably my own ignorance not knowing how to do it differently!

I agree with you that it sounds too direct and impersonal, but I thought everyone (victorians) has to do this first, then add more details to show yourselves as real people- and real people we certainly are, with needs and wants and feelings like everybody else...

When you suggest opening up a thread in the main section, I'm not sure how to do this and where? Are you able to advise me please?

With thanks.
aqua:wave:

[xkwzit]

I have been told that aqua has found her egg donor :angel:. That is such fantastic news and we all here wish her the very best as she continues her amazing journey. I will close this thread for her now, so that others can search for their donor angels.