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tens2many
06-05-2011, 21:46
"These are just some of the things we really miss"

Twelve months have passed us by...
Since the day we didnt get
To say hello,only goodbye....

We didnt get the chance to hold Archie tight...
Nor to cuddle him....
Or feed him late at night.

We didnt get to hear him say...
Daddy or mummy...
Nor watch him roll ...
From his back to his tummy.

Never to watch him try to crawl...
Never to see him...
Ride a bike or catch a ball.

We shall never push him...
On a swing...
Nor to hear his sweet...
Little voice learn to sing.

No sleepless nights...
When he shall teeth...
Never to wipe his little button nose..
When he shall sneeze.

Never to watch him run and walk...
Never to hear him try to talk...
Never to hear him cry or laugh...
Never to give him a..
Warm bubble bath....
Never to give him a....
Simple little kiss.

For these are just some of the
Little things we really miss.....

Instead of happiness and joy.....
All we have is sadness
for our little boy...
Broken hearts and broken dreams....
Memories of what......
Should have been.

Our hearts are full of sorrow...
Without our Archie all we have...
Is a broken tomorrow...

Hope it was okay to share my special poem that I wrote in my boys memory (nearly 3yrs ago when I thought I wouldnt survive) with ladies I hope know exactly how I feel.

Thanks

tens2many
27-05-2011, 19:28
201 views at my poem and not 1 comment I thought id come to a section where at least 1 person would have had them same feelings wrong spot obviously...........

Etienne
27-05-2011, 19:34
Hey, I read your poem and thought it was beautiful. I didn't reply because I have never had your experience so feel like I cannot post in this section. I'm sure lots of poeple have done te same x hugs

RainbowSky
27-05-2011, 19:39
Such a beautiful poem, what a lovely tribute to your little one xx

the girls mum
27-05-2011, 19:56
Wow - that poem is heartbreaking and beyond beautiful - I am crying as I type.

I cant relate, as I have never been through it but I couldnt not post after reading that.

xxxx:hugs::hugs::hugs:

Jenga
27-05-2011, 20:19
Beautiful poem..

dillydAlly
27-05-2011, 20:21
Just lovely! Sucha touching tribute!

EliG
27-05-2011, 20:32
Just beautiful... It brought tears to my eyes. I can't even imagine the heartbreak you have gone through.

Thank you so much for sharing xxx

Travdan
27-05-2011, 20:36
Beautiful words.

I'm so sorry for your loss.

sunnymummy
27-05-2011, 20:39
:crying:
So sorry for your loss.

iMischa
27-05-2011, 20:44
what a lovely poem, it was very heartfelt, and im so sorry for your loss.

*biggest of hugs*

Jakois
27-05-2011, 20:52
I'm so sorry for your loss.

Your poem is beautiful.

Frangi
27-05-2011, 21:36
I am so sorry for your loss, but thank you for making me stop and think that even after a hard, long week with the kids that I am truly blessed to be able to enjoy all those moments with them.
Your poem is beautiful and your bub was blessed to have u as his mum.

august
27-05-2011, 22:01
(((hugs))) that was both heartbreaking and beautiful to read, I am sorry for the loss of your little boy.

tens2many
28-05-2011, 16:07
Thankyou ladies I felt very alone :wave:

Mybabyjade
28-05-2011, 19:28
Tens2many - Your poem is just gorgeous. So sorry to hear of your loss.


Thanks you for sharing.

:hugs::hugs:

Me
28-05-2011, 19:44
You have a beautiful talent to express your emotions. May Archie be watching over you smiling.
Xxx

danii
25-01-2012, 11:12
I have just lost my little Raymond James and that is how I feel I'm sorry for your loss did the lost sorrow ease a little and did it take you a long time? Stupid questions just so sad and lost!

Penny88
25-01-2012, 14:50
I've never gone through the heartbreak you have endured but I cried when I read your poem.

I'm so sorry for your loss, may little Archie always be watching over you. :hugs:

youngandpregnant
25-01-2012, 20:22
This is a beautiful poem and describes exactly how I feel, I gave birth to my beautiful sleeping son on 20th January 2012 (friday just gone) at 21 weeks. I feel heart broken and i can really relate to this poem as ill never get to see my son do any of those things. Your poem is beautiful and thankyou for sharing it xx